Composition

2016-07-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Long time no talk! Just like what you said, I was also worried if I felt left behind because of my absence from class. I didn't want to put my class on hold unless natural disasters happen. Hehehe! However, my business is also one of important things for me so I could't help but prioritize my urgent task. Frankly speaking, it was so irritating and bothersome because the weather was super duper hot and no one greeted me. How unpleasant it was! I hope this kind of urgent task won't happen often in the future. Anyway, I think you already finished your task in Power English and went home so I will stop here for today. See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

I saw your message and I felt the feelings you had

while you were on the go typing your composition.

Thank you so much sharing.
I am just here listening to your concerns.

See you tomorrow!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Long time no talk! 

>> Correct
 Just like what you said, I was also worried if I felt left behind because of my absence from class.

>> Correct
 I didn\'t want to put my class on hold unless natural disasters happen. Hehehe! 

>> Correct [Don\'t say that!]
 However, my business is also one of important things for me so I could\'t help but prioritize my urgent task.

>> However, my business is also one of the most important things for me so I couldn\'t help but prioritize my urgent task.
 Frankly speaking, it was so irritating and bothersome because the weather was super duper hot and no one greeted me.

>> Correct
 How unpleasant it was!
>> Correct 

hope this kind of urgent task won\'t happen often in the future. 

>> Correct
 Anyway, I think you already finished your task in Power English and went home so I will stop here for today.

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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