Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I saw your message and I felt the feelings you had
while you were on the go typing your composition.
Thank you so much sharing.
I am just here listening to your concerns.
See you tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Long time no talk!
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Just like what you said, I was also worried if I felt left behind because of my absence from class.
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I didn\'t want to put my class on hold unless natural disasters happen. Hehehe!
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However, my business is also one of important things for me so I could\'t help but prioritize my urgent task.
>> However, my business is also one of the most important things for me so I couldn\'t help but prioritize my urgent task.
Frankly speaking, it was so irritating and bothersome because the weather was super duper hot and no one greeted me.
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How unpleasant it was!
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hope this kind of urgent task won\'t happen often in the future.
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Anyway, I think you already finished your task in Power English and went home so I will stop here for today.
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See you tomorrow! ^^**
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