Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Your sentences are absolutely astonishing!
They are very intelligible. Anyhow, the content makes
me bothered. I hope that you can really
have a good night sleep tonight.
See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Yesterday, I finally bought ear plugs and wore them when I went to sleep.
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It was very useful to prevent me to be exposed to cicadas\' noise.
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However, I was bothered by mosquitoes\' attack so I didn\'t have a tight sleep as well.
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I usually put my mosquito net in front of the bedroom door like curtains to block them from coming inside so I have no idea of how they were able to be inside yesterday.
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I killed 3 mosquitoes with my electric swatter as soon as I got up this morning and their stomachs were full of my blood.
>> Correct [OMG!]
I did my blood donation to them unintentionally. ^^;;
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I hope that I will not be bothered by anything today!
>> Correct [I hope so.]
Anyway, please check my composition below.
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1. To me, studying English is worth spending my own money.
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2. To me, talking to my friends is always worth my time.
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3. To me, traveling is worth giving up my sleep.
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4. To me, money isn\'t worth losing my best friend.
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I will stop here for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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