Composition

2016-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I just read 'Six Word Stories' you sent me thru SKYPE but I am unable to understand what they want to say. I can understand those meanings of each sentences but I have no idea of the connection of them. I'd like to ask you to explain why you suddenly encourage me to read those sentences. I am very curious about your intention. By the way, here in Seoul, it is raining heavily so my shoes got totally wet. Because of this heavy rain, the weather is colder than before so I feel somehow refreshed. However, after this rain, the real summer will begin soon so I am somehow afraid of the weather condition that I have to encounter in the near future. I think staying in the office is the wisest way for me to pass until summer healthily. There is a computer and air conditioning system in the office so I can avoid from the heat without boredom. I can say that I kill two birds with one stone. Anyway, that is all for today and have a wonderful weekend! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^

Thank you for exerting effort in understanding

the stories I sent you.

The stories have deeper meanings.

I wanted to test your comprehension in a deeper way.

Let\'s try to discuss them next time. I want you to

read it again^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I just read \'Six Word Stories\' you sent me thru SKYPE but I am unable to understand what they want to say. 

>> Correct
 I can understand those meanings of each sentences but I have no idea of the connection of them. 

>> I can understand the meaning of each sentence but I have no idea about the connection among them.
I\'d like to ask you to explain why you suddenly encourage me to read those sentences. 

>> Correct
I am very curious about your intention. 

>> Correct
 By the way, here in Seoul, it is raining heavily so my shoes got totally wet.

>> Correct
 Because of this heavy rain, the weather is colder than before so I feel somehow refreshed. 

>> Correct
 However, after this rain, the real summer will begin soon so I am somehow afraid of the weather condition that I have to encounter in the near future. 

>> Correct
 I think staying in the office is the wisest way for me to pass until summer healthily.

>> Correct
 There is a computer and air conditioning system in the office so I can avoid from the heat without boredom. 

>>  There is a computer and air conditioning system in the office so I can avoid the heat without boredom. 
I can say that I kill two birds with one stone.

>> Correct
 Anyway, that is all for today and have a wonderful weekend! ^^**

>> Correct

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