Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for exerting effort in understanding
the stories I sent you.
The stories have deeper meanings.
I wanted to test your comprehension in a deeper way.
Let\'s try to discuss them next time. I want you to
read it again^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I just read \'Six Word Stories\' you sent me thru SKYPE but I am unable to understand what they want to say.
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I can understand those meanings of each sentences but I have no idea of the connection of them.
>> I can understand the meaning of each sentence but I have no idea about the connection among them.
I\'d like to ask you to explain why you suddenly encourage me to read those sentences.
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I am very curious about your intention.
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By the way, here in Seoul, it is raining heavily so my shoes got totally wet.
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Because of this heavy rain, the weather is colder than before so I feel somehow refreshed.
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However, after this rain, the real summer will begin soon so I am somehow afraid of the weather condition that I have to encounter in the near future.
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I think staying in the office is the wisest way for me to pass until summer healthily.
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There is a computer and air conditioning system in the office so I can avoid from the heat without boredom.
>> There is a computer and air conditioning system in the office so I can avoid the heat without boredom.
I can say that I kill two birds with one stone.
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Anyway, that is all for today and have a wonderful weekend! ^^**
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