Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]^^
Thank you for telling me about what happened to you last weekend.
I envy you because you were able to meet your friend.
In my case, my friend also came back to the Philippines
and I am dying to meet her.
I hope I can do that someday.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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It was very hot last weekend so I went to a shopping mall to avoid the heat.
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It is not far away from my house so I rode a bicycle to get there.
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My boyfriend already reserved movie tickets online so we needed to get there before 8 am.
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We watched a movie entitled \'JASON BOURNE\' and it was very interesting and exciting.
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During watching it, we totally lost track of time.
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These days, I am into Matt Damon so I really wanted to watch this Bourne series.
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After watching this movie, we went around the shopping mall to look for a new mobile phone with a reasonable price.
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We finally decided to buy \'Samsung Galaxy S7\' with a low price and it was for my boyfriend.
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After doing this task, I went to the [이름]po airport to meet my friend.
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It has been a long time that we last met each other so I felt very pleased.
>> It has been a long time since we last met each other so I felt very pleased.
Because of her tight schedule, we got together with each other only for 4 hours so I feel very regretful.
>> Because of her tight schedule, we spent four hours together so I felt very regretful.
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^
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