Composition

Hello, [이름]!
While I was reading your composition, I felt the depth

of the thought you wanted to share.

I just felt it. OMG.

I suddenly want to see my mother because of it.

You also made me think about life.

Thank you.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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Only a few days ago, I didn\'t sleep well because of cicadas\' noise.

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 However, these days, it seems like their cry is getting smaller and smaller.

>> However, these days, it seems like their cry is getting softer and softer. 
 Maybe, it is because their life span is too short and some of them have already gone. 

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 As far as I know, they live for 6~7 years in the ground when they are larva and they only can live for around 2 weeks after being an adult.

>> As far as I know, they live for 6~7 years in the ground when they are a larva, they only can live for around 2 weeks after being an adult. 
 I somehow can understand the reason why they can\'t help but cry louder and louder.

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 They might be desperate to mate before the summer is finished. 

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 The purpose of their lives is only for reproduction and they are always faithful to their duties. 

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 Suddenly, I think that their life pattern is similar with human beings excepting the short life span, 

>> Suddenly, I think that their life pattern is similar with human beings except that they have a shorter life span.
 Human beings are also desperate to leave offspring and sacrifice themselves for their children to grow well. 

>> Human beings are also desperate to bring up their offspring and sacrifice themselves for their children to grow well. 
 Well, that is our life and at the same time, that is our fate that we can\'t deny. 

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 I will stop here for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

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