Composition

2016-08-03 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning,Teacher! It is time to make a composition in relation to 'Knowing'. 1. Knowing it would take at least 2 hours to get to the office, I got myself out of bed early. I wasn't finally late for work. 2. Sensing it would be more expensive than expected, I decided to go to the bank first to withdraw some money. However, I noticed that there was no enough money in my bank account. What a pity!!! I eventually gave up buying what I wanted to have. 3. Not knowing he wasn't coming, I waited for him until midnight. I was so foolish and stupid. I should have waited for him only for a maximum of 30 minutes. 4. Knowing he wouldn't come, Kate wasn't disappointed and didn't call and push him to come. I think Kate should change her mind about him. I will stop here for today and please help me check if they are wrong. See you! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
The sentences are absolutely hilarious!

Thank you for making them!

I would really want to see more of these!

Thank you for making my day!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning,Teacher! 

>> Correct
 It is time to make a composition in relation to \'Knowing\'.
>> Correct
1. Knowing it would take at least 2 hours to get to the office, I got myself out of bed early.
I wasn\'t finally late for work.
>> Correct
 2. Sensing it would be more expensive than expected, I decided to go to the bank first to withdraw some money.
However, I noticed that there was no enough money in my bank account.
What a pity!!!

I eventually gave up buying what I wanted to have.
>> Correct [Hahaha! Really!]
3. Not knowing he wasn\'t coming, I waited for him until midnight.
I was so foolish and stupid.
I should have waited for him only for a maximum of 30 minutes.
>> Correct 
4. Knowing he wouldn\'t come, Kate wasn\'t disappointed and didn\'t call and push him to come.
I think Kate should change her mind about him. 

>> Correct [I think so, too!]
 I will stop here for today and please help me check if they are wrong.
See you! ^^**

>> Correct 

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