Composition

Hi, [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts

about the Olympics.

Honestly, I think that it is a bad idea to hold the

Olympics in Brazil. It is like a suicide action

for me.

Maybe, we can talk more about this tomorrow.

See you~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 I have already extended my class by using my bonus point. 

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I like this benefit and I think it makes students stay longer here in Power English.

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 By the way, the Olympics is going to be held in Brazil. 

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 The opening ceremony will begin this Saturday and it will be broadcasted live all over the world. 

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 However, as I heard, Brazil is unqualified to hold the Olympics because of poor environments. 

>> However, as I heard, Brazil is unqualified to hold the Olympics because of poor/hazardous environment. 
 Public transportation and accommodation facilities haven\'t been prepared perfectly so these situations will make people feel uncomfortable and inconvenient. 

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 Moreover, many people there have still kept on doing demonstration against holding the Olympics so the political situation is unstable. 

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 The most serious thing is about Zika virus and it has been still spread to the country.

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 If I were a member of the national team, I would not want to participate in this Olympics. 

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 Many athletes also have already announced their absence and it can proves how serious the situation that they are encountering is.

>> Many athletes also have already announced their absence and it can prove how serious the situation that they are encountering is.
 No matter what, since the Olympics is supposed to be held in Brazil, I just hope that it will be operated without any incidents and accidents. 

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 I will stop here for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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