Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I feel so sorry for you and the other people
who are really experiencing hot weather.
I hope that you won\'t have other medical conditions
because of that weather.
Stay cool, OK?
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I am happy to hear that you are going to go to your hometown with your friend.
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How exciting it is!
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I hope that you can make this journey pleasant!
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By the way, it was very hot last night so I clasped a bottle of frozen water and tried to go to sleep.
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The thermometer in my house read 34 degrees Celsius last night and my fans blew the hot wind out.
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In this case, even if there are a lot of fans that I have, it is useless.
>> In this case, even if I have a lot of fans, they are useless.
I think, it is the hottest weather that I have ever experienced.
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According to the weather forecast, the temperature today will be also very high and even there will be a big possibility for us to experience the higher temperature than what we had yesterday.
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In this terrible situation, people still can\'t turn air-conditions on as much as they need because of the electric progressive tax.
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Our government only gives a benefit of a low rate of electric charges to companies.
>> Our government only gives benefits of a low rate of electric charges to companies.
How unfair it is!
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Indeed, our government has never considered this hard situation that the public is encountering.
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I will just pray that this summer goes faster and faster.
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I will stop here for today and see you on Monday! ^^**
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