Composition

2016-08-08 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I forget to ask you about your journey last weekend during our class due to talking about a profound issue. Hehe~ I think you definitely had a wonderful time with your family and friend. By the way, I was interested in your social mood about marriage there. I think NBSB is an interning shorthand and I can see a common social situation about relationships with the opposite sex there. I guess NBSB doesn't have a negative meaning there but here in Korea, if we point to someone and say this word, the person would be offended. Here in Korea, we also have the vocabulary that has the same meaning with NBSB and we call it 'MO TAE SOLO'. It means that a person who has never been in a romantic relationship. The problem there is that nobody wants to hear this word from others because it has contained a negative meaning like you are unqualified to have a friend of the opposite sex. When it comes to the meaning of this, it seems like we have a different perception there and here. What I understand about NBSB is that you are more independent and responsible and you are capable to take care of yourself. I like this idea but I somehow hope that you don’t get much affected by this idea. No matter what, being with someone is also a kind of happiness. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!^^

Thank you for spending time with me again.

And sharing this opinion gave me a clearer

perception about the things you have there in

Korea. I have to ask more questions but

probably, tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
I forget to ask you about your journey last weekend during our class due to talking about a profound issue. Hehe~

>> I forgot to ask you about your journey last weekend during our class due to talking about a profound issue. Hehe~
I think you definitely had a wonderful time with your family and friend.

>> Correct
By the way, I was interested in your social mood about marriage there.

>> Correct
I think NBSB is an interning shorthand and I can see a common social situation about relationships with the opposite sex there.

>> Correct
I guess NBSB doesn\'t have a negative meaning there but here in Korea, if we point to someone and say this word, the person would be offended.

>> I guess NBSB doesn\'t have a negative meaning there but here in Korea, if we point out this one to someone, the person would be offended.

Here in Korea, we also have the vocabulary that has the same meaning with NBSB and we call it \'MO TAE SOLO\'.

>> Correct
It means that a person who has never been in a romantic relationship.

>> It means that a person has never been in a romantic relationship.
The problem there is that nobody wants to hear this word from others because it has contained a negative meaning like you are unqualified to have a friend of the opposite sex.

>> Correct
When it comes to the meaning of this, it seems like we have a different perception there and here.

>> Correct
What I understand about NBSB is that you are more independent and responsible and you are capable to take care of yourself.

>> What I understand about NBSB is that you are more independent, responsible capable of taking care of yourself.
I like this idea but I somehow hope that you don’t get much affected by this idea.

>> Correct
No matter what, being with someone is also a kind of happiness.

>> Correct
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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