Composition

2016-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon,Teacher! I was back to the office at 11 am after finishing my task outside. It was a sudden task for me so I only couldn't help but put my class on hold. When I was on my way to go back to the office, I felt that the weather was really hotter in compassion to the early morning. I usually get up at 6:30 am and I leave for work at 7 am. However, today, I went to the office at 11 am so I felt really exhausted by the heat. I think somehow, this heat would never finish this year. The temperature at night is higher again so I am suffering from the tropical night for 3 weeks. Could you give me the rain that you are having there every day? Hehehe! At this moment, I really envy you. I have no idea how long we have to endure this heat. All I have to do is just to keep myself in a good condition in order to beat this heat. Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Good Monday morning, [이름]!

I understand what happened to you but having this cold weather and rainy season doesn\'t help the Philippines right now

so if only I could send you the monsoon, I would really do it!

A lot of the places here in the Philippines are flooded because of this monsoon.

Let\'s talk about this one later.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon,Teacher! 

>> Correct
 I was back to the office at 11 am after finishing my task outside. 

>> Correct
 It was a sudden task for me so I only couldn\'t help but put my class on hold.

>> Correct
 When I was on my way to go back to the office, I felt that the weather was really hotter in compassion to the early morning. 

>> When I was on my way to go back to the office, I felt that the weather was really hotter in comparison to the early morning. 
 I usually get up at 6:30 am and I leave for work at 7 am. 

>> Correct
 However, today, I went to the office at 11 am so I felt really exhausted by the heat.

>> Correct
 I think somehow, this heat would never finish this year. 

>> Correct
 The temperature at night is higher again so I am suffering from the tropical night for 3 weeks. 

>> Correct
 Could you give me the rain that you are having there every day? Hehehe!

>> Correct
 At this moment, I really envy you. 

>> Correct
 I have no idea how long we have to endure this heat.

>> Correct
 All I have to do is just to keep myself in a good condition in order to beat this heat.

>> Correct
 Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

>> Correct

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