Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good Monday morning, [이름]!
I understand what happened to you but having this cold weather and rainy season doesn\'t help the Philippines right now
so if only I could send you the monsoon, I would really do it!
A lot of the places here in the Philippines are flooded because of this monsoon.
Let\'s talk about this one later.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon,Teacher!
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I was back to the office at 11 am after finishing my task outside.
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It was a sudden task for me so I only couldn\'t help but put my class on hold.
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When I was on my way to go back to the office, I felt that the weather was really hotter in compassion to the early morning.
>> When I was on my way to go back to the office, I felt that the weather was really hotter in comparison to the early morning.
I usually get up at 6:30 am and I leave for work at 7 am.
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However, today, I went to the office at 11 am so I felt really exhausted by the heat.
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I think somehow, this heat would never finish this year.
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The temperature at night is higher again so I am suffering from the tropical night for 3 weeks.
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Could you give me the rain that you are having there every day? Hehehe!
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At this moment, I really envy you.
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I have no idea how long we have to endure this heat.
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All I have to do is just to keep myself in a good condition in order to beat this heat.
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Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**
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