Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I was also surprised that you have the same taste when it comes to
choosing the style of our clothes.^^
I cannot imagine us going shopping together!
All people would be wondering about why we would go to
the men\'s apparel.
Let\'s talk more about this one tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Today, we talked about shopping and I learned more about you.
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I was supersized that we have a similar pattern when it comes to choosing clothes.
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Even if we have a different reason in wearing guy\'s clothes, I could identify with you.
>> Even if we have a different reason in wearing guy\'s clothes, I could identify you.
Hahaha!
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In my case, I like wearing long length of T shirts so I prefer to wear T shirts for men.
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These days, T shirt for men is very skinny and it is trendy here so it usually fits in my body if I wear the smallest size.
>> These days, T shirt for men is very skinny and it is trendy here so it usually fits my body if I wear the smallest size.
This truth somehow makes me hurt my pride but I can\'t deny my preference. Heheheh!
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The advantage that I can enjoy is that I can have good products with a hot deal.
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The S (small) size for men is not sold as much as the other size so the size usually leaves in stock.
>> The S (small) size for men is not sold as much as the other sizes so it is usually in stock.
If I am in lucky, I can acquire not only cheap ones but also good designed ones.
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I feel pleased when I buy cost-effective goods.
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Maybe, you will also feel the same way.
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By the way, my brain didn\'t work well when I spoke in English during our class.
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Maybe, it is because I took 3 days rest and I didn’t think of studying English during the days.
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Well, studying English is really challenging.
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See you tomorrow! ^^
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