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2016-08-16 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! Today, we talked about shopping and I learned more about you. I was supersized that we have a similar pattern when it comes to choosing clothes. Even if we have a different reason in wearing guy's clothes, I could identify with you. Hahaha! In my case, I like wearing long length of T shirts so I prefer to wear T shirts for men. These days, T shirt for men is very skinny and it is trendy here so it usually fits in my body if I wear the smallest size. This truth somehow makes me hurt my pride but I can't deny my preference. Heheheh! The advantage that I can enjoy is that I can have good products with a hot deal. The S (small) size for men is not sold as much as the other size so the size usually leaves in stock. If I am in lucky, I can acquire not only cheap ones but also good designed ones. I feel pleased when I buy cost-effective goods. Maybe, you will also feel the same way. By the way, my brain didn't work well when I spoke in English during our class. Maybe, it is because I took 3 days rest and I didn’t think of studying English during the days. Well, studying English is really challenging. See you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
I was also surprised that you have the same taste when it comes to

choosing the style of our clothes.^^

I cannot imagine us going shopping together!
All people would be wondering about why we would go to

the men\'s apparel.

Let\'s talk more about this one tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Today, we talked about shopping and I learned more about you. 

>> Correct
 I was supersized that we have a similar pattern when it comes to choosing clothes. 

>> Correct
 Even if we have a different reason in wearing guy\'s clothes, I could identify with you.

>> Even if we have a different reason in wearing guy\'s clothes, I could identify you.
 Hahaha! 

>> Correct
 In my case, I like wearing long length of T shirts so I prefer to wear T shirts for men. 

>> Correct
 These days, T shirt for men is very skinny and it is trendy here so it usually fits in my body if I wear the smallest size. 

>> These days, T shirt for men is very skinny and it is trendy here so it usually fits my body if I wear the smallest size. 
 This truth somehow makes me hurt my pride but I can\'t deny my preference. Heheheh! 

>> Correct
 The advantage that I can enjoy is that I can have good products with a hot deal.

>> Correct
 The S (small) size for men is not sold as much as the other size so the size usually leaves in stock. 

>> The S (small) size for men is not sold as much as the other sizes so it is usually in stock.
If I am in lucky, I can acquire not only cheap ones but also good designed ones.

>> Correct
 I feel pleased when I buy cost-effective goods. 

>> Correct
 Maybe, you will also feel the same way. 

>> Correct
 By the way, my brain didn\'t work well when I spoke in English during our class. 

>> Correct
 Maybe, it is because I took 3 days rest and I didn’t think of studying English during the days. 

>> Correct
 Well, studying English is really challenging. 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct

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