Composition

2016-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Somehow, you looked pleased and happy today. Do you have a special appointment with a significant other this coming weekend? Hehe! I like seeing you happy. I feel so good too today just because it is Friday. Yesterday, one of my friends gave me free movie and play tickets so maybe, I think it is also one of the reasons why I feel good today. However, I noticed that I already saw the play two years ago so I think I might have to give this ticket to another friend. It seems like my memory is getting weaker like you. Hehehe! By the way, our traditional martial art 'TAEKWONDO' game is in progress in Rio's 2016 Summer Olympics. Some of athletes have already won the gold and bronze medal and we are still expecting for the other athletes to acquire good records. I am very proud of them and appreciate their efforts. Of course, I'd like to encourage the other athletes who perspired but didn't win the medal as well. Anyway, have a wonderful weekend ans see you on Monday! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]~

Thank you for seeing me happy.

I just woke up on the right side of the bed!^^ kkk

Congratulations to you and to your fellow Koreans because

I believe, one goal of a Korean is the goal of the whole country.

Same here in the Philippines!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct
Somehow, you looked pleased and happy today. 

>> Correct
 Do you have a special appointment with a significant other this coming weekend? Hehe!

>> Correct [NONE! hahaha!]
 I like seeing you happy. 

>> Correct
 I feel so good too today just because it is Friday. 

>> Correct
 Yesterday, one of my friends gave me free movie and play tickets so maybe, I think it is also one of the reasons why I feel good today. 

>> Correct 
However, I noticed that I already saw the play two years ago so I think I might have to give this ticket to another friend. 

>> Correct
 It seems like my memory is getting weaker like you. Hehehe!

>> Correct
 By the way, our traditional martial art \'TAEKWONDO\' game is in progress in Rio\'s 2016 Summer Olympics. 

>> Correct
 Some of athletes have already won the gold and bronze medal and we are still expecting for the other athletes to acquire good records. 

>> Correct
 I am very proud of them and appreciate their efforts.

>> Correct
 Of course, I\'d like to encourage the other athletes who didn\'t win the medal as well. 

>> Correct
 Anyway, have a wonderful weekend ans see you on Monday! ^^**

>> Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**

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