Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]~
Thank you for seeing me happy.
I just woke up on the right side of the bed!^^ kkk
Congratulations to you and to your fellow Koreans because
I believe, one goal of a Korean is the goal of the whole country.
Same here in the Philippines!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Somehow, you looked pleased and happy today.
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Do you have a special appointment with a significant other this coming weekend? Hehe!
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I like seeing you happy.
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I feel so good too today just because it is Friday.
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Yesterday, one of my friends gave me free movie and play tickets so maybe, I think it is also one of the reasons why I feel good today.
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However, I noticed that I already saw the play two years ago so I think I might have to give this ticket to another friend.
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It seems like my memory is getting weaker like you. Hehehe!
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By the way, our traditional martial art \'TAEKWONDO\' game is in progress in Rio\'s 2016 Summer Olympics.
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Some of athletes have already won the gold and bronze medal and we are still expecting for the other athletes to acquire good records.
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I am very proud of them and appreciate their efforts.
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Of course, I\'d like to encourage the other athletes who didn\'t win the medal as well.
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Anyway, have a wonderful weekend ans see you on Monday! ^^**
>> Anyway, have a wonderful weekend and see you on Monday! ^^**
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