Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!^^
Supposing that I don\'t have to check the movie review,
please tell me the story about the movie you just watched.
And also, I would like to tell you that I am happy
that the heat is about to go away!^^
See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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There is good news that the heat is getting weaker.
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Cicadas no longer cry and I can hear crickets chirping at night.
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It indicates that autumn is coming now.
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Even if the heat is still strong in the afternoon but we can feel the cold weather in the morning and at night.
>> Even if the heat is still strong in the afternoon, we can feel the cold weather in the morning and at night.
Indeed, this summer has lasted really long.
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By the way, I saw a movie entitled \'Thelma and Louise\' yesterday and it was very interesting.
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I already saw this movie about 5~6 years ago but I suddenly wanted to see it again.
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I could feel a different feeling with the previous feeling that I had.
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I seemed like I felt empathy with characters in the movie.
>> I seemed like I felt empathy with the characters in the movie.
I think watching the same movie again is also a good hobby for me.
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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