Composition

2016-08-22 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! There is good news that the heat is getting weaker. Cicadas no longer cry and I can hear crickets chirping at night. It indicates that autumn is coming now. Even if the heat is still strong in the afternoon but we can feel the cold weather in the morning and at night. Indeed, this summer has lasted really long. By the way, I saw a movie entitled 'Thelma and Louise' yesterday and it was very interesting. I already saw this movie about 5~6 years ago but I suddenly wanted to see it again. I could feel a different feeling with the previous feeling that I had. I seemed like I felt empathy with characters in the movie. I think watching the same movie again is also a good hobby for me. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!^^
Supposing that I don\'t have to check the movie review,

please tell me the story about the movie you just watched.
And also, I would like to tell you that I am happy 

that the heat is about to go away!^^

See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 There is good news that the heat is getting weaker.

>> Correct
 Cicadas no longer cry and I can hear crickets chirping at night.

>> Correct
 It indicates that autumn is coming now. 

>> Correct
 Even if the heat is still strong in the afternoon but we can feel the cold weather in the morning and at night. 

>> Even if the heat is still strong in the afternoon, we can feel the cold weather in the morning and at night. 

 Indeed, this summer has lasted really long. 

>> Correct
 By the way, I saw a movie entitled \'Thelma and Louise\' yesterday and it was very interesting. 

>> Correct
 I already saw this movie about 5~6 years ago but I suddenly wanted to see it again. 

>> Correct
 I could feel a different feeling with the previous feeling that I had. 

>> Correct
 I seemed like I felt empathy with characters in the movie. 

>>  I seemed like I felt empathy with the characters in the movie.  
I think watching the same movie again is also a good hobby for me. 

>> Correct
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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