Composition

2016-08-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Regarding my composition yesterday, I wrote the number wrong. Yes, both of us apply to the number 4 depending on our sleeping posture and I should have written the number 4 'Form of Solder'. However, at the same time, I apply to 'Form of Starfish' as well. Well, I might be unable to sleep with this 'Form of Starfish' position after getting married. Hehehe! By the way, after finishing our class, I attached antinoise tape on the insides of the doors of bookshelves. However, it doesn't seem to work well. The doors are too heavy so I can still hear the noise from closing the doors. It is so bothersome and discordant. I need to buy more functional antinoise tape again. What am I doing here??? It's so ridiculous. I have thought about what if I directly tell him to close the doors softly. I think our boos and I might feel awkward to each other after I point out his action. Well, I should try to come up with other good ideas. Hehehe! See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

I just want to tell you one thing.
If you and your boss really have this professional

relationship, then telling him shouldn\'t really bother you.

Because if you tell him, he needs to take it professionally.
Maybe, I can discuss more of this tomorrow.

See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 Regarding my composition yesterday, I wrote the number wrong. 

>> Correct
 Yes, both of us apply to the number 4 depending on our sleeping posture and I should have written the number 4 \'Form of Solder\'.

>> Correct
 However, at the same time, I apply to \'Form of Starfish\' as well. 

>> Correct
 Well, I might be unable to sleep with this \'Form of Starfish\' position after getting married. Hehehe! 

>> Correct
 By the way, after finishing our class, I attached antinoise tape on the insides of the doors of bookshelves. 

>>  By the way, after finishing our class, I attached anti-noise tape on the insides of the doors of bookshelves. 

 However, it doesn\'t seem to work well.

>> Correct
 The doors are too heavy so I can still hear the noise from closing the doors. 

>> Correct
 It is so bothersome and discordant. 

>> Correct
 I need to buy more functional antinoise tape again. 

>>  I need to buy more functional antinoise tape again. 
 What am I doing here??? 

>> Correct
 It\'s so ridiculous.

>> Correct
 I have thought about what if I directly tell him to close the doors softly. 

>>  I have thought that, what if ,I directly tell him to close the doors softly. 
I think our boos and I might feel awkward to each other after I point out his action.

>> I think our boss and I might feel awkward to each other after I point out his action.
 Well, I should try to come up with other good ideas. Hehehe!

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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