Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I just want to tell you one thing.
If you and your boss really have this professional
relationship, then telling him shouldn\'t really bother you.
Because if you tell him, he needs to take it professionally.
Maybe, I can discuss more of this tomorrow.
See you then!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct
Regarding my composition yesterday, I wrote the number wrong.
>> Correct
Yes, both of us apply to the number 4 depending on our sleeping posture and I should have written the number 4 \'Form of Solder\'.
>> Correct
However, at the same time, I apply to \'Form of Starfish\' as well.
>> Correct
Well, I might be unable to sleep with this \'Form of Starfish\' position after getting married. Hehehe!
>> Correct
By the way, after finishing our class, I attached antinoise tape on the insides of the doors of bookshelves.
>> By the way, after finishing our class, I attached anti-noise tape on the insides of the doors of bookshelves.
However, it doesn\'t seem to work well.
>> Correct
The doors are too heavy so I can still hear the noise from closing the doors.
>> Correct
It is so bothersome and discordant.
>> Correct
I need to buy more functional antinoise tape again.
>> I need to buy more functional antinoise tape again.
What am I doing here???
>> Correct
It\'s so ridiculous.
>> Correct
I have thought about what if I directly tell him to close the doors softly.
>> I have thought that, what if ,I directly tell him to close the doors softly.
I think our boos and I might feel awkward to each other after I point out his action.
>> I think our boss and I might feel awkward to each other after I point out his action.
Well, I should try to come up with other good ideas. Hehehe!
>> Correct
See you tomorrow! ^^**
>> Correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.