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2016-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Indeed, it is a happy Friday to you. I hope you will have a wonderful time with your family. ^^ In my case, my boyfriend is going to take 'Law School Examination' this Sunday so I would be with him in the library tomorrow. He has wanted to study law and this time is his second challenge. I am going to cheer for him to get a good record. I will stop here for you. Heihei ^~^ See you on Monday and take care!

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^
Thank you so much for always being supportive.

Not only to your boyfriend but also to me as your teacher.

By the way, you are getting more and more conversant

so keep up the good work!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!
>> Correct
Indeed, it is a happy Friday to you. 

>> Correct
 I hope you will have a wonderful time with your family. ^^

>> Correct
 In my case, my boyfriend is going to take \'Law School Examination\' this Sunday so I would be with him in the library tomorrow. 

>> Correct
 He has wanted to study law and this time is his second challenge.

>> He has wanted to study law and this time, it is his second challenge. (Do you mean chance?)
 I am going to cheer for him to get a good record. 

>> Correct
 I will stop here for you. Heihei ^~^

>> Correct
 See you on Monday and take care!

>> Correct

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