Composition

2016-08-30 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning,Teacher! Good to see you again! However, you looked really tired and seemed to need some time to take a rest. I believe that you will get some time to take a nap betweenwhiles. The most important thing is to take care of yourself. Don't make me worry about you! ^^ By the way, thanks to you, it is suddenly cold here and now, we are even experience the chilly weather. Even if you just told me as a joke that you would send me the cold weather last time, it seems like it is really working well. I will stop here for today and see you tomorrow! Plus, be careful not to catch a cold!

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for the concern.

Don\'t worry about me.

I will really take care of myself.

Tomorrow will be a brand new day.
I will look better tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning,Teacher!

>> Correct
 Good to see you again!

>> Correct
 However, you looked really tired and seemed to need some time to take a rest. 

>> Correct
 I believe that you will get some time to take a nap betweenwhiles. 

>> Correct
 The most important thing is to take care of yourself. 

>> Correct
 Don\'t make me worry about you! ^^

>> Correct
 By the way, thanks to you, it is suddenly cold here and now, we are even experience the chilly weather. 

>>  By the way, thanks to you, it is suddenly cold here and now, we are even experiencing the chilly weather.  

Even if you just told me as a joke that you would send me the cold weather last time, it seems like it is really working well. 

>> Correct [My magic has worked eventually!]
 I will stop here for today and see you tomorrow! 

>> Correct
 Plus, be careful not to catch a cold!

>> Correct

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