Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, [이름]!
Thank you for the concern.
Don\'t worry about me.
I will really take care of myself.
Tomorrow will be a brand new day.
I will look better tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning,Teacher!
>> Correct
Good to see you again!
>> Correct
However, you looked really tired and seemed to need some time to take a rest.
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I believe that you will get some time to take a nap betweenwhiles.
>> Correct
The most important thing is to take care of yourself.
>> Correct
Don\'t make me worry about you! ^^
>> Correct
By the way, thanks to you, it is suddenly cold here and now, we are even experience the chilly weather.
>> By the way, thanks to you, it is suddenly cold here and now, we are even experiencing the chilly weather.
Even if you just told me as a joke that you would send me the cold weather last time, it seems like it is really working well.
>> Correct [My magic has worked eventually!]
I will stop here for today and see you tomorrow!
>> Correct
Plus, be careful not to catch a cold!
>> Correct
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