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2016-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! Today, we suddenly talked about fashion and it was very interesting. I am not usually into fashion but these days, here in Korea, I can see a lot of people wearing square pants so I also feel tempted to follow this trendy fashion for once. It is my first time to wear the square pants and I feel very comfortable. This pants are with a rubber band in the waist so even if I eat a lot, I don't need to unbutton my trousers secretly. However, you made me feel frustrated during our class. You said, these kinds of pants are for somebody who has a perfect body shape, but I don't think it is me. Hehehe! I really need to buy another mirror in order to check weather my appearance from the back looks good or not. You can imagine what and how I will do at home. ^^;; By the way, I'd like to help me check these sentences below. Are these all correct? 1. It is an honor to coach him 2. I am an honor to do that. 3. He is an honor to his family. See you tomorrow!^^**

강사 첨삭

Happy Wednesday again, [이름]!^^

Thank you for sharing your thoughts about fashion.

It was indeed interesting. But don\'t get frustrated like me.

I am not as tall as you are so you still have the advantage

of wearing square pants.

Don\'t worry and be confident!^_^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Today, we suddenly talked about fashion and it was very interesting. 

>> Correct
 I am not usually into fashion but these days, here in Korea, I can see a lot of people wearing square pants so I also feel tempted to follow this trendy fashion for once. 

>> Correct 
It is my first time to wear the square pants and I feel very comfortable. 

>> Correct
 This pants are with a rubber band in the waist so even if I eat a lot, I don\'t need to unbutton my trousers secretly. 

>> Correct [I need one pair then!^^]
 However, you made me feel frustrated during our class.

>> Correct
 You said, these kinds of pants are for somebody who has a perfect body shape, but I don\'t think it is me. Hehehe! 

>> Correct [It still depends on how you manage wearing them, my dear [이름].]
 I really need to buy another mirror in order to check weather my appearance from the back looks good or not. 

>>  I really need to buy another mirror in order to check whether my appearance from the back looks good or not. 
 You can imagine what and how I will do at home. ^^;;

>> Correct
 By the way, I\'d like to help me check these sentences below. 

>> Correct
 Are these all correct? 

>> Correct 
1. It is an honor to coach him 

>> Correct 
2. I am an honor to do that. 

>> I am honored to do that.
 3. He is an honor to his family. 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow!^^**

>> Correct

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