Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday again, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing your thoughts about fashion.
It was indeed interesting. But don\'t get frustrated like me.
I am not as tall as you are so you still have the advantage
of wearing square pants.
Don\'t worry and be confident!^_^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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Today, we suddenly talked about fashion and it was very interesting.
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I am not usually into fashion but these days, here in Korea, I can see a lot of people wearing square pants so I also feel tempted to follow this trendy fashion for once.
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It is my first time to wear the square pants and I feel very comfortable.
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This pants are with a rubber band in the waist so even if I eat a lot, I don\'t need to unbutton my trousers secretly.
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However, you made me feel frustrated during our class.
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You said, these kinds of pants are for somebody who has a perfect body shape, but I don\'t think it is me. Hehehe!
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I really need to buy another mirror in order to check weather my appearance from the back looks good or not.
>> I really need to buy another mirror in order to check whether my appearance from the back looks good or not.
You can imagine what and how I will do at home. ^^;;
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By the way, I\'d like to help me check these sentences below.
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Are these all correct?
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1. It is an honor to coach him
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2. I am an honor to do that.
>> I am honored to do that.
3. He is an honor to his family.
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See you tomorrow!^^**
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