Composition

2016-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! You with a red colored crew neck T- shirt look really good today. The red color seems to make people look more beautiful. Hehehe! By the way, it is the first day of September and I feel that time flies so fast. After enduring one week, we can greet our long holiday. Both of us are expecting for the holiday to come and we have the different reason to expect this one. In my case, I can escape from waking up early and don't need to be diligent for 5 days. This point is what I like the most. *^^* When it comes to your plan, I will pray that you can have the good weather condition. Finally, please help me check which one is correct below. => A blind imitation of role model can lead to losing individuality of each. => A blind imitation of role model can lead to lose individuality of each. I am confused about what I have to use after 'lead to'. According to my basic grammar knowledge, gerund or noun should be used after 'lead to' because 'to' in this phrase is considered as a preposition. However, sometimes, I could see 'verb' after 'lead to'. Could you help me make examples for me to tell the difference between ‘lead to verb’ and ‘lead to gerund or noun’? Thank you for your help in advance and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for doing greeting me in

a very cheerful way!^^

Regarding your concern about grammar, it would be better

if I explain it during our class.
For now, I want you to check this website for better understanding.

http://www.oxfordlearnersdictionaries.com/definition/english/lead1_1?q=lead

Take care my dear.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 You with a red colored crew neck T- shirt look really good today.

>> Correct [I appreciate it a lot!^^]
 The red color seems to make people look more beautiful. Hehehe! 

>> Correct
 By the way, it is the first day of September and I feel that time flies so fast. 

  > Correct
After enduring one week, we can greet our long holiday. 

>> Correct
 Both of us are expecting for the holiday to come and we have the different reason to expect this one. 

>> Both of us are expecting for the holiday to come and we have the different reasons.

 In my case, I can escape from waking up early and don\'t need to be diligent for 5 days. 

>> Correct
 This point is what I like the most. *^^*

>> Correct
 When it comes to your plan, I will pray that you can have the good weather condition. 

>> Correct
 Finally, please help me check which one is correct below. 

>> Correct
 => A blind imitation of role model can lead to losing individuality of each.

>> Correct
 => A blind imitation of role model can lead to lose individuality of each.

>> A blind imitation of role model can lead each person / somebody to lose individuality.
 I am confused about what I have to use after \'lead to\'.

>> Correct
 According to my basic grammar knowledge, gerund or noun should be used after \'lead to\' because \'to\' in this phrase is considered as a preposition. 

>>  According to my basic grammar knowledge, a gerund or noun should be used after \'lead to\' because \'to\' in this phrase is considered as a preposition. 
 However, sometimes, I could see \'verb\' after \'lead to\'. 

>> Correct
 Could you help me make examples for me to tell the difference between ‘lead to verb’ and ‘lead to gerund or noun’?

>> Correct
Thank you for your help in advance and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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