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2016-09-02 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good morning, Teacher! A happy Friday to you! It's been a long time for you to have a bright day! Is it still sunny there? I hope that Mr. [Name] can wait until you do your laundry at home. Hehehe! By the way, today, you were not a teacher but a nurse to me in our class. Your kind explanation is very useful and informative for me. I will lead my boyfriend to follow your directions and let you know how his ankle condition would be changed on Monday. Have a nice weekend and see you soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^
The thing I gave you is an intervention but not magic, ok?

Don\'t expect that it will be really good.

Maybe, there would be a change but not too much. Ok?

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 A happy Friday to you!

>> Correct
 It\'s been a long time for you to have a bright day!

>> Correct
 Is it still sunny there? 

>> Correct [Not anymore.  TT.TT]
 I hope that Mr. [Name] can wait until you do your laundry at home. Hehehe! 

>> Correct
 By the way, today, you were not a teacher but a nurse to me in our class. 

>> Correct
 Your kind explanation is very useful and informative for me.

>> Correct
 I will lead my boyfriend to follow your directions and let you know how his ankle condition would be changed on Monday. 

>> Correct
 Have a nice weekend and see you soon! ^^**

>> Correct

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