Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!^^
The thing I gave you is an intervention but not magic, ok?
Don\'t expect that it will be really good.
Maybe, there would be a change but not too much. Ok?
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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A happy Friday to you!
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It\'s been a long time for you to have a bright day!
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Is it still sunny there?
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I hope that Mr. [Name] can wait until you do your laundry at home. Hehehe!
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By the way, today, you were not a teacher but a nurse to me in our class.
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Your kind explanation is very useful and informative for me.
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I will lead my boyfriend to follow your directions and let you know how his ankle condition would be changed on Monday.
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Have a nice weekend and see you soon! ^^**
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