Composition

Hello, [이름]!

You can\'t really blame those kind of people.

Money is money. It can really manipulate people\'s minds.

It just depends on one person on how they control it.

See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

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 According to your advice, my boyfriend went to see a doctor last Saturday. 

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 Fortunately, he only got bruised badly but didn\'t break his ankle. 

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The doctor recommended him to get an X-ray taken and there was no abnormal shape in his ankle. 

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 Both of us could breathe easily so we decided to go to the horse racing park with some friends. 

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 It\'s been a long time since we last went there so we were very excited to see real horses running.

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 Just like what you said, it is a kind of gambling so it is easy for people to be addicted to this game. 

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 If someone can\'t believe and control oneself, I don\'t recommend him or her to go there even if it is only for entertainment. 

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 There were a lot of older people gambling and losing their money. 

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 Even if there is a restriction to the amount of putting money in each race, a lot of people were wasting their money by losing the game. 

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 I felt a little bit bitter when I saw those people. 

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 Anyway, have a good day and see you tomorrow!^^

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