Composition

Hi there, [이름]!^^
Our topics are getting more and more interesting.

You are getting a lot more conversant which means

you are really improving!

Keep it up my dear!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 I am happy to hear that you are having the bright weather. 

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 I hope that this bright weather will last at least during this day. 

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 By the way, today, we talked about gambling again.

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 Here in Korea, we have popular gambling games like Horse Racing Event, Lottery and Casino.

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 These are all legal and a lot of people enjoy these games only for entertainment. 

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 The most popular game is Lottery and it is held every Friday evening. 

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 Most of the people buy this lottery to win the first prize but the realistic result is not like what they expect. 

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 Apart from these, we also have a game called \'Go-Stop\'.

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 It is also considered as gambling but it is very popular and entertaining to the public. 

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 It is usually played in a small group from families or friends and the betting money is not that high. 

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 Because of its trait, it is also considered as a good game in working brain. 

>> Because of its trait, it is also considered as a good game for the brain to work.
 People say that it is very helpful to prevent from developing dementia and it is true. 

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 I also sometimes play this game on my mobile phone and it attracts me strongly. 

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 However, we should know that too much is as bad as too little. 

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 This is today’s good lesson. Hehehe! ^^

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 See you tomorrow!

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