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2016-09-07 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher! Today, I am somehow free in the office so I am allowed to answer your question at once. Hehehe! Towards your question, I have checked the age on the internet and the people over the age of 19 can buy the ticket. It is the same age limitation with buying alcoholic drinks and the people with this age are considered as an adult here in Korea. Did I solve your curiosity? See you tomorrow! Hehehe! ^^

강사 첨삭

[이름],

Let me laugh first!^^ Hahaha!

I know that your boss isn\'t there so I understand the way you are feeling right now!

In my case, if I am not mistaken, my mom taught me to buy a lottery ticket

and fill it in at the age of 15!^^

With her supervision, I was successful buying my first ticket!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

P.S. Of course, I wasn\'t at the legal age so I violated the law.^^

Dear Teacher!

>> Correct
 Today, I am somehow free in the office so I am allowed to answer your question at once. Hehehe! 

>> Correct
 Towards your question, I have checked the age on the internet and the people over the age of 19 can buy the ticket. 

>> Correct
 It is the same age limitation with buying alcoholic drinks and the people with this age are considered as an adult here in Korea.

>> Correct 
Did I solve your curiosity? 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! Hehehe! ^^

>> Correct

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