Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름],
Let me laugh first!^^ Hahaha!
I know that your boss isn\'t there so I understand the way you are feeling right now!
In my case, if I am not mistaken, my mom taught me to buy a lottery ticket
and fill it in at the age of 15!^^
With her supervision, I was successful buying my first ticket!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
P.S. Of course, I wasn\'t at the legal age so I violated the law.^^
Dear Teacher!
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Today, I am somehow free in the office so I am allowed to answer your question at once. Hehehe!
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Towards your question, I have checked the age on the internet and the people over the age of 19 can buy the ticket.
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It is the same age limitation with buying alcoholic drinks and the people with this age are considered as an adult here in Korea.
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Did I solve your curiosity?
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See you tomorrow! Hehehe! ^^
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