Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
It is really interesting for both of us to continuously talk about this topic.
Maybe, I can tell you other things related to this topic
tomorrow.
We had another time well-spend today.
See you again!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I\'d like to explain to you about a lottery ticket here.
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1. We can buy lottery tickets within the total amount of US$100 for every event.
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However, we always doubt about this limitation because no one can check the total quantity of ticket that people buy one by one.
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2. Only a few people can have the right to sell the lottery ticket.
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*Single-parent family\'s householder
*Disabled people
*Public charge
*Independence patriot
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3. The stores that produced the first prize are usually popular to people who want to buy the ticket.
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People intentionally go those stores to have lucky energies from them.
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4. We have two types of methods of buying ticket.
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The first one is automatic.
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A machine helps people choose numbers automatically.
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The other one is that we choose numbers and mark them on a card ourselves.
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5. The result is broadcasted live on TV on Friday nights.
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There is a rumor that drawing the numbers has a trick but I don\'t care because I only see it as an entertainment.
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Anyway, I will stop here for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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