Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher!
I have checked the tracking NO of the tent that I bought on the internet but its whereabouts has not been updated yet.
I already worried that there would be a possibility to be delayed before I ordered it because there would be definitely a lot of packages that have to be sent to customers as a present in celebration of our big holiday.
Should I have bought it on the offline shop?
However, I could not give up the benefit of buying it on the online shop. Hehehe!
If I didn't get it until tomorrow, maybe I would have no choice but to take a small one and go camping.
It's been two years since I last went camping so I am very excited with my plan.
I hope that I won't spoil my excitement by this tent.
I will let you know the result soon. ^^
Have a wonderful weekend and see you soon! ^^**
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday again, [이름]!I think you should still push through with the plan even though
the tent you ordered wouldn\'t arrive yet. You have a small one
and you can just deal with it. Camping is a good activity and you shouldn\'t
give up your plan just because of the late delivery.
Have faith like me~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
>> CorrectI have checked the tracking NO of the tent that I bought on the internet but its whereabouts has not been updated yet.
>> CorrectI already worried that there would be a possibility to be delayed before I ordered it because there would be definitely a lot of packages that have to be sent to customers as a present in celebration of our big holiday.
>> I already worried that there would be a possibility that it wil be delayed because there would be definitely a lot of packages that have to be sent to customers as a present in celebration of our big holiday. Should I have bought it on the offline shop?
>> Correct [I think so.]However, I could not give up the benefit of buying it on the online shop. Hehehe!
>> Correct [I understand. It is very convenient.]If I didn\'t get it until tomorrow, maybe I would have no choice but to take a small one and go camping.
>> CorrectIt\'s been two years since I last went camping so I am very excited with my plan.
>> It\'s been two years since I last went camping so I am very excited about my plan.
I hope that I won\'t spoil my excitement by this tent.
>> I hope that my excitement will not be spoiled by this tent.I will let you know the result soon. ^^
>> CorrectHave a wonderful weekend and see you soon! ^^**
>> Correct
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