Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Reading your composition, [이름], makes me already miss you!
Have a safe trip, ok?
If you have a chance, please still send me a message through our composition.
Tell me stories about your trip.
Don\'t forget to call the managers about your schedule, as well.
Have a great holiday!
~~Teacher Erine~~
Dear Teacher!
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I have bad news to tell you.
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I will be unable to take our class next Monday and Tuesday because of my business trip.
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I have to go to Changwon city this Sunday and stay for 2 days.
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I need to check manufacturing processes in factories of our clients and take some pictures.
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I will tell you more about the situation during our class.
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Wish you have a wonderful holiday!
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Don\'t miss me too much! Hehehe ^^
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