Composition

2016-09-09 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear Teacher! I have bad news to tell you. I will be unable to take our class next Monday and Tuesday because of my business trip. I have to go to Changwon city this Sunday and stay for 2 days. I need to check manufacturing processes in factories of our clients and take some pictures. I will tell you more about the situation during our class. Wish you have a wonderful holiday! Don't miss me too much! Hehehe ^^

강사 첨삭

Reading your composition, [이름], makes me already miss you!

Have a safe trip, ok?

If you have a chance, please still send me a message through our composition.

Tell me stories about your trip.

Don\'t forget to call the managers about your schedule, as well.

Have a great holiday!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Dear Teacher!

>> Correct
 I have bad news to tell you. 

>> Correct
 I will be unable to take our class next Monday and Tuesday because of my business trip. 

>> Correct
 I have to go to Changwon city this Sunday and stay for 2 days. 

>> Correct
 I need to check manufacturing processes in factories of our clients and take some pictures. 

>> Correct
 I will tell you more about the situation during our class. 

>> Correct
 Wish you have a wonderful holiday! 

>> Correct
 Don\'t miss me too much! Hehehe ^^

>> Correct

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