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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! We found no GR "dongyang " while we matching "Goods Receipts Not Vouchered " (19000060) balance to zero. The total amount is 162,778,000KRW and there are 3 case more as seen below. Originally, "Dongyang" material directly go to "Kohsan". So we requested GR to Mr. [Name] of Logistic and Mr. [Name] of Purchasing and he requested Single sales order to Ms. [Name] of customer center. Single sales order was created and GR was done on 17th June . Finally, "Dongyang"'s balance of "Goods Receipts Not Vouchered " was zero. Single sales order is here. If you have any questions please let me know. Thank you. Dear [Name]. [Name], Would you please focus on my composition today?

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Dear [Name]. [Name],
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Good morning!
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We found no GR "dongyang " while we matching "Goods Receipts Not Vouchered " (19000060) balance to zero.

>>We did not find GR dongyang that is in the receipt that have zero balance matching "Goods Receipts Not Vouchered ."
The total amount is 162,778,000KRW and there are 3 case more as seen below.

>> The total amount is 162,778,000KRW and there are three (3) more cases as seen below.
Originally, "Dongyang" material directly go to "Kohsan".

>> Originally, "Dongyang" material is directly brought to " Koshan".

        or you can also say:

>> Originally, "Dongyang" material is directly sent to " Koshan".
So we requested GR to Mr. [Name] of Logistic and Mr. [Name] of Purchasing and he requested Single sales order to Ms. [Name] of customer center.

>> With regards to that, we sent GR to Mr. [Name] of Logistic and Mr. [Name] of Purchasing and they both requested single sales order to Ms. [Name] of Customer Center.
Single sales order was created and GR was done on 17th June .

>> Single sales order was created and GR was finished on the 17th of June.
Finally, "Dongyang"'s balance of "Goods Receipts Not Vouchered " was zero.

>>Finally, " Dongyang's" balance matched  the " Goods Receipts Not Vouchered" that as a zero balance.
Single sales order is here.

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If you have any questions please let me know.

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Thank you.

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Dear [Name]. [Name],

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Would you please focus on my composition today?

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