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2016-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! I finished my long holiday and I am back to my office today. I almost took one week holiday so I didn't feel like going to work this morning. I already knew that there would be a lot of tasks to do so I somehow felt afraid. Hehehe ^^;; I am still trying to deal with my tasks within this day and I am sure that I will finish all tasks before I leave. When it comes to my and your holiday stories, let's talk tomorrow. See you soon! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^

I also felt the same thing yesterday.

It was really hard for me to speak in English!^^ hahaha!

Anyhow, I still managed to teach my students well yesterday.

I hope you were able to finish your tasks as well.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 I finished my long holiday and I am back to my office today.

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 I almost took one week holiday so I didn\'t feel like going to work this morning.

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 I already knew that there would be a lot of tasks to do so I somehow felt afraid. Hehehe ^^;;

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 I am still trying to deal with my tasks within this day and I am sure that I will finish all tasks before I leave. 

>> Correct 
When it comes to my and your holiday stories, let\'s talk tomorrow. 

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 See you soon! ^^**

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