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Hello, [이름]!^^

I\'m really glad that you were able to see the brighter side of the situations

that happened to you last vacation.

I can say that you had a lot of tough times

but I\'m very proud that you didn\'t take it negatively!^^

Let\'s talk more tomorrow!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher! 

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 Our class is really short so I wasn\'t able to tell you more about my story during my holiday. 

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 There were a lot of troubles that happened to me so I and my boyfriend were exhausted by those unexpected events.

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 On the second day of the camping, we wanted to go fishing and set off to one village that the navigation guided. 

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When we were near the village, we had an uncanny feelings but we were still going to trust our navigation. 

 >> When we were near the village, we had an uncanny feeling but we were still going to trust our navigation. 
 The village was near the beach so the view was nice but the problem there was that we were unable to get out of the place because our car was not strong enough to go uphill in mud. 

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 At that time, it was raining and there were a lot of gravels and too much mud on the slope so these conditions leaded our car to be stuck in that place. 

>> At that time, it was raining and there were a lot of gravels and too much mud on the slope so these conditions led our car be stuck in that place. 
 We couldn\'t help but call \'Car Insurance Center\'. 

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 We thought that if a four-wheel-drive car helped our car, it would be very easy for our car to be escaped from mud but the person from Car Insurance Center didn’t even try to help even if he has a four-wheel-drive car and just recommended us to call another big car at our own expense. 

 >> We thought that if a four-wheel-drive car helped our car, it would be very easy for our car to escape from mud but the person from Car Insurance Center didn’t even try to help even if he has a four-wheel-drive car and just recommended us to call another big car at our own expense. 
 At that time, we were very rash so we decided to listen to his advice. 

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 Finally, we successfully towed our car and we went back to Seoul on the same day. 

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 After taking some rest at home, no matter which way I look at this situation, we shouldn’t have paid this expense of tow so we called Insurance Head Office to claim this situation. 

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 Fortunately, the Head Office decided to compensate for the expense that we paid so we were able to remove unfair feelings. 

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 It was really a memorable trip and I won’t forget it for good. Hehehe!

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 There is a saying here in Korea that once you leave home, there would only be hardships of life. 

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 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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