Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I read your composition after I had drunk a cup of
ginger concoction. I needed that one to alleviate my symptoms
and I hope that it will be ok sooner or later.
Let me tell you my ideas about 4WD tomorrow.
It\'s an interesting topic for me.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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I am sorry to hear that you got a cold.
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I think drinking lukewarm water will be helpful for you.
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I hope that your symptoms won\'t get worse any longer.
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By the way, regarding our class, both of us felt stuffy because we don\'t have knowledge about cars. Hehehe!
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To know about cars, I have searched terms that I know in Korean and I think I can seem to define the meaning of 2WD and 4WD.
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Normally, there are two kinds of cars and one is called a front-wheel drive (FWD=2WD) and the other one is called a four-wheel drive (4WD).
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These cars all have 4 tires but the definition depends on whether the engine influences only two tires or 4 tires or not.
>> These cars all have 4 tires but the definition depends on whether the engine influences only two tires or 4 tires.
Simply, the engine of 2WD is only involved in drives of the front two wheels.
>> Simply, the engine of 2WD involves the two front wheels.
In the same logic, the engine of 4WD drives four wheels so this kind of car\'s power is really strong.
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When it comes to 2WD, it is suitable for daily driving so it is cheaper and its fuel efficiency is good.
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On the other hand, 4WD is suitable for unpaved roads, snowy roads, mountain paths and so on so the cost of driving is a little bit high in comparison to the 2WD car.
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This time, I was attracted to this 4WD car so if I have a plan to buy a car, I will buy this kind of strong car. Hehehe!
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I hope you will understand what I said during our class thru this composition. ^^
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See you tomorrow!
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