Composition

2016-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I am sorry to hear that you got a cold. I think drinking lukewarm water will be helpful for you. I hope that your symptoms won't get worse any longer. By the way, regarding our class, both of us felt stuffy because we don't have knowledge about cars. Hehehe! To know about cars, I have searched terms that I know in Korean and I think I can seem to define the meaning of 2WD and 4WD. Normally, there are two kinds of cars and one is called a front-wheel drive (FWD=2WD) and the other one is called a four-wheel drive (4WD). These cars all have 4 tires but the definition depends on whether the engine influences only two tires or 4 tires or not. Simply, the engine of 2WD is only involved in drives of the front two wheels. In the same logic, the engine of 4WD drives four wheels so this kind of car's power is really strong. When it comes to 2WD, it is suitable for daily driving so it is cheaper and its fuel efficiency is good. On the other hand, 4WD is suitable for unpaved roads, snowy roads, mountain paths and so on so the cost of driving is a little bit high in comparison to the 2WD car. This time, I was attracted to this 4WD car so if I have a plan to buy a car, I will buy this kind of strong car. Hehehe! I hope you will understand what I said during our class thru this composition. ^^ See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

I read your composition after I had drunk a cup of

ginger concoction. I needed that one to alleviate my symptoms

and I hope that it will be ok sooner or later.

Let me tell you my ideas about 4WD tomorrow.

It\'s an interesting topic for me.
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I am sorry to hear that you got a cold. 

>> Correct
 I think drinking lukewarm water will be helpful for you. 

>> Correct
 I hope that your symptoms won\'t get worse any longer. 

>> Correct
 By the way, regarding our class, both of us felt stuffy because we don\'t have knowledge about cars. Hehehe!

>> Correct
 To know about cars, I have searched terms that I know in Korean and I think I can seem to define the meaning of 2WD and 4WD. 

>> Correct
 Normally, there are two kinds of cars and one is called a front-wheel drive (FWD=2WD) and the other one is called a four-wheel drive (4WD).

>> Correct 
These cars all have 4 tires but the definition depends on whether the engine influences only two tires or 4 tires or not. 

>> These cars all have 4 tires but the definition depends on whether the engine influences only two tires or 4 tires.
 Simply, the engine of 2WD is only involved in drives of the front two wheels.

>> Simply, the engine of 2WD involves the two front wheels. 
 In the same logic, the engine of 4WD drives four wheels so this kind of car\'s power is really strong. 

>> Correct 
 When it comes to 2WD, it is suitable for daily driving so it is cheaper and its fuel efficiency is good. 

>> Correct  
On the other hand, 4WD is suitable for unpaved roads, snowy roads, mountain paths and so on so the cost of driving is a little bit high in comparison to the 2WD car. 

>> Correct 
 This time, I was attracted to this 4WD car so if I have a plan to buy a car, I will buy this kind of strong car. Hehehe!

>> Correct 
 I hope you will understand what I said during our class thru this composition. ^^

>> Correct 
 See you tomorrow!

>> Correct 

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