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2016-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! Your voice sounded like getting worse. Your cold is caused by a virus so I am sure that you will be okay after a week. Fortunately, the weekend is coming soon so you can take some time to take care of yourself. Your throat is very important as a teacher so don't be exhausted too much. I will stop here for today and I hope that you won't suffer from your stuffy nose at least. I know it is a terrible feeling.....ㅠㅠ See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Don\'t be so worried about me.

Here in the Philippines, we have this kind of saying.

\"This is not even near my liver!\"

It is literally translated from Tagalog to English.

It means that my condition will not affect me a lot.

So, don\'t you worry. OK?

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Your voice sounded like getting worse.

>> Correct [I know right!]
 Your cold is caused by a virus so I am sure that you will be okay after a week. 

>> Correct [I do hope so, [이름]]
 Fortunately, the weekend is coming soon so you can take some time to take care of yourself. 

>> Correct [Not yet]
 Your throat is very important as a teacher so don\'t be exhausted too much.

>> Correct
 I will stop here for today and I hope that you won\'t suffer from your stuffy nose at least. 

>> Correct
 I know it is a terrible feeling.....ㅠㅠ

>> Correct
See you tomorrow!

>> Correct

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