Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
How are you?
I am doing fine. I just need to cough as if I
am a dog barking. kkkk.
Don\'t worry. I would feel better soon.
Condolences to you and to your extended family members.
See you tomorrow.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon Teacher!
>> Correct
My uncle (my father\'s sister\'s husband) passed away so I couldn\'t help but put my class on hold.
>> Correct [Condolence my dear, [이름].]
I was supposed to attend the funeral but I couldn\'t book a train ticket to go to Busan.
>> I was supposed to attend the funeral but I couldn\'t book a train ticket going to Busan.
(The funeral hall was in Busan.)
>> Correct
When I realized that I was unable to go there, it was almost 8 PM.
>> Correct
I wanted to take my class again but it was too late to make my class schedule back to normal because the managers already left from the office.
>> I wanted to take my class again but it was too late to make my class schedule back to normal because the managers already left the office.
I should have told it to you this morning. I am sorry. ^^;;
>> I should have told you this morning. I am sorry. ^^;;
How about your condition?
>> Correct
If I am going to look at this situation that I put my class on hold with a positive perspective, I seemed to give you some time to take a rest. ^^;;
>> Correct
Anyway, I want to see you alive next Monday. Hehehe! ^^:;
>> Correct
Watch your health! ^^**
>> Correct
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