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2016-09-25 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Good afternoon Teacher! My uncle (my father's sister's husband) passed away so I couldn't help but put my class on hold. I was supposed to attend the funeral but I couldn't book a train ticket to go to Busan. (The funeral hall was in Busan.) When I realized that I was unable to go there, it was almost 8 PM. I wanted to take my class again but it was too late to make my class schedule back to normal because the managers already left from the office. I should have told it to you this morning. I am sorry. ^^;; How about your condition? If I am going to look at this situation that I put my class on hold with a positive perspective, I seemed to give you some time to take a rest. ^^;; Anyway, I want to see you alive next Monday. Hehehe! ^^:; Watch your health! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!

How are you?

I am doing fine. I just need to cough as if I

am a dog barking. kkkk.
Don\'t worry. I would feel better soon.

Condolences to you and to your extended family members.

See you tomorrow.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon Teacher!
>> Correct
My uncle (my father\'s sister\'s husband) passed away so I couldn\'t help but put my class on hold.

>> Correct [Condolence my dear, [이름].]
 I was supposed to attend the funeral but I couldn\'t book a train ticket to go to Busan. 

>> I was supposed to attend the funeral but I couldn\'t book a train ticket going to Busan.
 (The funeral hall was in Busan.)

>> Correct
 When I realized that I was unable to go there, it was almost 8 PM.

>> Correct
 I wanted to take my class again but it was too late to make my class schedule back to normal because the managers already left from the office. 

>>  I wanted to take my class again but it was too late to make my class schedule back to normal because the managers already left the office. 
 I should have told it to you this morning. I am sorry. ^^;;

>> I should have told  you this morning. I am sorry. ^^;;
 How about your condition? 

>> Correct
 If I am going to look at this situation that I put my class on hold with a positive perspective, I seemed to give you some time to take a rest. ^^;;

>> Correct
 Anyway, I want to see you alive next Monday. Hehehe! ^^:;

>> Correct
 Watch your health! ^^**

>> Correct

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