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2016-09-28 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! Here in Seoul, it is raining. According to the weather forecast, it will become colder after this rain. Until today, I used to wear short sleeves shirts but I would have to put those summer clothes away this weekend. Someone is envious of having 4 seasons but I feel somehow uncomfortable and annoyed. I wish I could only have the fall season. ^^;; By the way, I have to go to LG tomorrow again so maybe, I need to put my class on hold. I will set off there at 7:30 AM so I will be unable to take my class. I don't usually visit LG but these days, there are a lot of quality issues on our goods so I have to be forced to see them. It is what I hate the most. ㅜㅜ I will tell you the story about it this Thursday. Take care! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
I saw your schedule and I just hope that your purpose

of going to LG today will be met.

It may be annoying but do your best for you not to

go there often. I am also hoping that

everything will be ok afterwards.

See you tomorrow~
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 Here in Seoul, it is raining. 

>> Correct
 According to the weather forecast, it will become colder after this rain. 

>> Correct
 Until today, I used to wear short sleeves shirts but I would have to put those summer clothes away this weekend. 

>> Correct 
Someone is envious of having 4 seasons but I feel somehow uncomfortable and annoyed. 

>> Correct [I am one of those people]
 I wish I could only have the fall season. ^^;;

>> Correct
 By the way, I have to go to LG tomorrow again so maybe, I need to put my class on hold. 

>> Correct
 I will set off there at 7:30 AM so I will be unable to take my class. 

>> Correct
 I don\'t usually visit LG but these days, there are a lot of quality issues on our goods so I have to be forced to see them. 

>>  I don\'t usually visit LG but these days, there are a lot of quality issues on our goods so I am forced to see them. 
 It is what I hate the most. ㅜㅜ

>> Correct
I will tell you the story about it this Thursday. 

>> Correct
 Take care! ^^**

>> Correct

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