Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I saw your schedule and I just hope that your purpose
of going to LG today will be met.
It may be annoying but do your best for you not to
go there often. I am also hoping that
everything will be ok afterwards.
See you tomorrow~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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Here in Seoul, it is raining.
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According to the weather forecast, it will become colder after this rain.
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Until today, I used to wear short sleeves shirts but I would have to put those summer clothes away this weekend.
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Someone is envious of having 4 seasons but I feel somehow uncomfortable and annoyed.
>> Correct [I am one of those people]
I wish I could only have the fall season. ^^;;
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By the way, I have to go to LG tomorrow again so maybe, I need to put my class on hold.
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I will set off there at 7:30 AM so I will be unable to take my class.
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I don\'t usually visit LG but these days, there are a lot of quality issues on our goods so I have to be forced to see them.
>> I don\'t usually visit LG but these days, there are a lot of quality issues on our goods so I am forced to see them.
It is what I hate the most. ㅜㅜ
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I will tell you the story about it this Thursday.
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Take care! ^^**
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