Composition

Good evening, [이름]!
I am here at home and teaching other students right now while

I read your composition. I wasn\'t able to greet you happy birthday for your mom.

However, I believe that any gift from you will be highly appreciated.^^

I will try my best to bring back my golden voice before we meet again.

See you soon, [이름]! Take care, too!^^

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher! 

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 Today is my mother\'s birthday.

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 I asked her what she wants but she said there is nothing that she needs. 

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 I think all mothers in the world would be having the same way of thinking that my mother has. 

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 I am not a person who gives up easily so I kept on asking her and finally determined what she wants. 

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 The world has become so much better. 

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 I can dispatch things to my mother by courier without delay and even I don\'t need to go out to buy something.

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 I already put something for my mother in my shopping basket and I am going to pay it now. 

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 Wait! 

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 There is a saying that there is nothing better than money in celebration of parents\' birthday. 

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 Should I have remitted some money to her in this case? Hehehe! 

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 Let me ponder more about it! ^^~ 

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 Anyway, I will stop here for today. 

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 Take care of yourself and I hope that I can hear your perfect voice next Wednesday! 

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 See you! ^^**

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