Composition

Good morning, [이름]!
It\'s nice to see your composition again. However, I felt a bit sad

because of what happened to your holiday.

It was the last holiday for Korean but you were not able to

have fun. Nevertheless, it\'s better to see that your boyfriend got better.

Good job, nurse!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

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 I think the holiday was too short. 

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 My holiday passed in the blink of an eye. 

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 Because of the bad weather condition, I didn\'t think about going out and I took 3 days of my holiday at home. 

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I sometimes went to Han river and lay down on the grass. 

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 Moreover, my boyfriend caught a cold so I had to take care of him at home. 

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 While I was at home for three days, menus that I had to make for mealtime made me feel a headache.

>> While I was at home for three days, thinking about the menus I had to make for mealtime made me have a headache.
 I wanted to help him get rid of his bad condition early so I made nutritious foods which contained seafood and meat. 

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Luckily, his symptom was not that severe so I was able to see his condition getting better and better. 

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 At this time of the year, a lot of people catch a cold easily so I also need to be careful in order not to get a cold. 

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 I really hate the terrible feeling when my nose gets congestion. 

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 You already totally recovered from your cold, didn\'t you? 

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 I will judge your condition thru your voice tomorrow. ^^

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 See you soon!

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