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2016-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good afternoon, Teacher! I have focused on the typhoon that is attacking our country now and luckily, Busan has escaped from the influence of typhoon. However, a lot of places are flooded so our government is trying to repair the damage by the typhoon. I think it will take some time to restore to the original state. I feel that natural phenomenons are the most fearful thing again. Indeed, human being is a piece of little things in front of nature. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
I hope your mother and sister\'s places were not really affected

by the flood. I believed you already checked their status, right?

Before this typhoon, I didn\'t really think that Korea gets affected

this hard.

Let\'s talk about this one later.

See you!
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good afternoon, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I have focused on the typhoon that is attacking our country now and luckily, Busan has escaped from the influence of typhoon.

>> Correct
 However, a lot of places are flooded so our government is trying to repair the damage by the typhoon. 

>> Correct
 I think it will take some time to restore to the original state. 

>> Correct [Let\'s hope that it will be sunny now and the sunlight will eventually dry up the water.]
 I feel that natural phenomenons are the most fearful thing again.

>>  I feel that natural phenomena are the most fearful thing again.
 Indeed, human being is a piece of little things in front of nature. 

>> Correct  
That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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