Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름], this is such a great idea!^^
Getting married is also being practical.
And with your attitude, I think you will really save a lot from
the effort you are willing to give.
If there are things I can help you with, just ask, OK?
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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Regarding the wedding culture there, I was somehow supersized at the information heard from you.
>> Regarding the wedding culture there, I was somehow surprised at the information I heard from you.
I didn\'t know that you need one year of preparation for a wedding.
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Here in Korea, we also need some time to prepare for the wedding but in my case, I am going to minimize all processes.
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Most of couples prefer to arrange all processes with a wedding planner so wedding package agencies are widespread here.
>> Most couples prefer to arrange all processes with a wedding planner so wedding package agencies are widespread here.
When it comes to the cost, of course, the wedding with a wedding planner would be very expensive but you don\'t need to put effort to find all suitable things such as a weeding hall, dress, makeup, studio and so on.
>> When it comes to the cost, of course, the wedding with a wedding planner would be very expensive but you don\'t need to put effort to find all suitable things such as a wedding hall, dress, makeup, studio and so on.
You can just move and act according to the guidance of a wedding planner if you are willing to pay the expensive cost.
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However, in my case, I am not a person who puts importance on my wedding and I want a substantial wedding without window dressing.
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Even if I am having this kind of simply thinking, there are still a lot of things to consider.
>> Even if I am having this kind of simple way of thinking, there are still a lot of things to consider.
For example, I need to prepare a wedding bouquet for myself and corsages for my soon to be husband, parents and a master of ceremony at a wedding.
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If I bought those thru wedding agencies, I would have to pay great expense.
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I am going to make those with my older sister the day before my wedding day.
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I think it would not only give a good memory to me, but also save the expense.
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Tiredness would be given. Hehehe!
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Let’s talk more about this tomorrow! ^^;;
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See you soon!
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