Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!^^
Thank you for telling me about your idea with
regards to drinking. At this point, I must admit that
I am more veteran than you are. I also commented
on the things you mentioned.
Let\'s discuss further tomorrow.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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When it comes to drinking alcohol, just like you, I am not also into it.
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However, I sometimes hope that I would be good at drinking it.
>> However, I sometimes hope that I would be good at drinking.
Someone says that the feeling after getting drunk is really good and wonderful.
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I have never felt this kind of feeling so I am very curious about it.
>> Correct [Don\'t be so curious. It can be euphoric but afterwards, it will give you a headache and body pain.]
Of course, drinking a lot of alcohol and making me get drunk is unhealthy and unproductive.
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However, I sometimes think that I want to be a drinker when I meet people who like drinking, especially here in Korea.
>> Correct [I had that kind of perception, too.]
Many people here consider this attitude as one of good methods that can make a good relationship.
>> Many people here consider this attitude as one of the best methods that can make a good relationship.
They said that they can identify with people who are good at drinking.
>> They said that they can identify people who are good at drinking.
I also agree with this opinion and I wish I would get drunk without bad drinking habits and pain.
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^
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