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2016-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! When it comes to drinking alcohol, just like you, I am not also into it. However, I sometimes hope that I would be good at drinking it. Someone says that the feeling after getting drunk is really good and wonderful. I have never felt this kind of feeling so I am very curious about it. Of course, drinking a lot of alcohol and making me get drunk is unhealthy and unproductive. However, I sometimes think that I want to be a drinker when I meet people who like drinking, especially here in Korea. Many people here consider this attitude as one of good methods that can make a good relationship. They said that they can identify with people who are good at drinking. I also agree with this opinion and I wish I would get drunk without bad drinking habits and pain. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]!^^

Thank you for telling me about your idea with

regards to drinking. At this point, I must admit that

I am more veteran than you are. I also commented

on the things you mentioned.

Let\'s discuss further tomorrow.

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher! 

>> Correct
 When it comes to drinking alcohol, just like you, I am not also into it. 

>> Correct
 However, I sometimes hope that I would be good at drinking it. 

>>  However, I sometimes hope that I would be good at drinking.
 Someone says that the feeling after getting drunk is really good and wonderful. 

>> Correct
 I have never felt this kind of feeling so I am very curious about it.

>> Correct [Don\'t be so curious. It can be euphoric but afterwards, it will give you a headache and body pain.]
 Of course, drinking a lot of alcohol and making me get drunk is unhealthy and unproductive. 

>> Correct 
However, I sometimes think that I want to be a drinker when I meet people who like drinking, especially here in Korea. 

>> Correct [I had that kind of perception, too.]
 Many people here consider this attitude as one of good methods that can make a good relationship. 

>> Many people here consider this attitude as one of the best methods that can make a good relationship. 
 They said that they can identify with people who are good at drinking. 

>> They said that they can identify people who are good at drinking.  

I also agree with this opinion and I wish I would get drunk without bad drinking habits and pain. 

>> Correct 
 That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^

>> Correct 

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