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2011-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name], Good afternoon! We confirmed the balance at 31/05/2011. The balance of AR and AP is OK. But your total sold manufacturing turnover amount is 924,671.71Euro. We received invoice of manufacturing turnover 924,671.71Euro from 01/06/2010 to 31/05/2011. The difference amount is 135.8Euro. I have to check again And we need your confirm before the sending letter to [이메일] Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name],

Here are the corrections of what you made. Job well done only few corrections were made.

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Dear [Name],
>>  Correct
Good afternoon!
>> Correct
We confirmed the balance at 31/05/2011.
>> We confirmed the balance as of 05/31/2011.
The balance of AR and AP is OK.
>> The balances of AR and AP are okay.
But your total sold manufacturing turnover amount is 924,671.71Euro.
>> But your total manufacturing sales turn over was 924,6712.71 Euro
We received invoice of manufacturing turnover 924,671.71Euro from 01/06/2010 to 31/05/2011.
>> WE received the invoice of manufacturing turn over which amounted to 924,671. 71 Euro from 01/06/2010 to 05/31/2011.
The difference amount is 135.8Euro.
>> There is a difference of 135.8 Euro.
I have to check again And we need your confirm before the sending letter to [이메일]

>> Please re check and confirm before sending to [이메일]
Thank you for your help.

>> Correct

This is the whole letter.

Dear [Name],

Good afternoon!

We confirmed the balance as of 05/31/2011. The balances of AR and AP are okay. But your total manufacturing sales turn over was  924.6712.71 Euro. WE received the invoice of manufacturing turn over which amounted to 924,671. 71 Euro from 01/06/2010 to 05/31/2011. There is a difference of 135.8 Euro. Please re check and confirm before sending to [이메일]

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