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Hello, teacher. My son, Junyoung, started to attend school. Today was the second day. As I see it, he is trying to adapt himself to his new school. I was afraid he might not adjust to a new environment. However, he is doing better than I expected. So, I'm really relieved. Below is some answers that his homeroom teacher asked to fill out. * What does your child most enjoy doing? Jayden loves building Lego blocks. He has a lot of Lego block series, and still wants to have more Lego blocks. Visiting Legoland is one of his happy memories in Malaysia. It is generally true that he enjoys static activities such as building Lego blocs and playing cards, but he exceptionally likes doing Taekwondo. He won his black belt in Taekwondo this spring in Korea. * What are your child's strengths? Jayden's previous homeroom teacher mentioned that Jayden especially has great consideration and he knows how to express sympathy for others. I should insist that my son has a heart of gold, and this is my child's strength.

Hello, Kaylee! Good to know that Jayden is adjusting well to his new school in Malaysia. I checked your composition below. Please review my corrections. Take care! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher. >> CORRECT!My son, Junyoung, started to attend school. >> CORRECT!Today was the second day. >> CORRECT!As I see it, he is trying to adapt himself to his new school. >> The way I see it, he is trying to adapt to his new school. I was afraid he might not adjust to a new environment. >> I was afraid that he might not adjust well to his new environment.However, he is doing better than I expected. >> CORRECT!So, I\'m really relieved.>> CORRECT!Below is some answers that his homeroom teacher asked to fill out.>> Below are some answers that his homeroom teacher asked me to fill out.* What does your child most enjoy doing? >> CORRECT!Jayden loves building Lego blocks. >> CORRECT!He has a lot of Lego block series, and still wants to have more Lego blocks. >> CORRECT!Visiting Legoland is one of his happy memories in Malaysia. >> Visiting Legoland was one of his happiest memories in Malaysia. It is generally true that he enjoys static activities such as building Lego blocs and playing cards, but he exceptionally likes doing Taekwondo. >> It is true that he enjoys sedentary activities such as building Lego blocks and playing cards, but he also likes doing Taekwondo.He won his black belt in Taekwondo this spring in Korea.>> He received his black belt in Taekwondo this spring in Korea.* What are your child\'s strengths? >> CORRECT!Jayden\'s previous homeroom teacher mentioned that Jayden especially has great consideration and he knows how to express sympathy for others. >> CORRECT! I should insist that my son has a heart of gold, and this is my child\'s strength. >> I should say that my son has a heart of gold and this is his strength.