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* What are your child's needs? Above all, Jayden needs to be familiar with this multicultural surroundings. This is his first time to live in foreign country and to study with various nationalities. He needs to know how to get along with those friends. For this, I believe it is required to communicate freely with them in English. Therefore, improving his English skill is necessary for him. * What are your hopes for your child this year? This year, I just hope that he adjusts well to his new school life. Jayden's previous school has somewhat different system to ISKL. So, it might feel strange for him at first. I believe it is crucial for him to adapt smoothly to this new environment. * What else can you tell us that will help us to teach your child? Jayden might not outgoing enough to say hello to new friends first. However, he would be a good friend if someone approach him first. He is struggling to make the adjustment. So, please keep watching out for him.

Hello, Kaylee! I reviewed your composition below. Please check my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ * What are your child\'s needs? >> CORRECT!Above all, Jayden needs to be familiar with this multicultural surroundings. >> Above all, Jayden needs to be familiar with his new multicultural surroundings. This is his first time to live in foreign country and to study with various nationalities. >> This is his first time to live in a foreign country and to study with various nationalities.He needs to know how to get along with those friends. >> CORRECT! For this, I believe it is required to communicate freely with them in English. >> CORRECT!Therefore, improving his English skill is necessary for him. >> CORRECT!* What are your hopes for your child this year? >> CORRECT!This year, I just hope that he adjusts well to his new school life.>> CORRECT! Jayden\'s previous school has somewhat different system to ISKL. >> Jayden\'s previous school has a somewhat different system to ISKL. So, it might feel strange for him at first. >> CORRECT!I believe it is crucial for him to adapt smoothly to this new environment.>> CORRECT!* What else can you tell us that will help us to teach your child? >> CORRECT!Jayden might not outgoing enough to say hello to new friends first. >> Jayden might not be that outgoing so he can\'t greet others first.However, he would be a good friend if someone approach him first. >> However, he would be a good friend if someone approaches him first.He is struggling to make the adjustment. >> He is struggling to adjust.So, please keep watching out for him. >> So please keep an eye on him. OR:>> So please keep on watching over him.