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2016-10-18 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! I am happy to see the sunny weather there. However, you also gave me bad news about a typhoon. I just hope that this typhoon's strength will be suddenly weaker than the strength of the last one. By the way, these days, we haven't focused on our book and I think it is time for us to start it again. I am not so sure but maybe, we are going to talk about the page 18, B discussion on Unit 06. ^^;; Free talking is also good but I felt that our topics were limited and repeated. I think our book has various topics so I want to study it more. Let's discuss about this issue tomorrow! See you tomorrow! ^^**

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!^^

Yes, it is indeed sad news. Let\'s hope that

it wouldn\'t really hit us that hard.

Oh, sure. Thank you for reminding me about the page of our book.

We will definitely have it then!^^
See you tomorrow, [이름]!

~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 I am happy to see the sunny weather there.
However, you also gave me bad news about a typhoon. 

>> Correct
 I just hope that this typhoon\'s strength will be suddenly weaker than the strength of the last one.

>> Correct
 By the way, these days, we haven\'t focused on our book and I think it is time for us to start it again. 

>> Correct
 I am not so sure but maybe, we are going to talk about the page 18, B discussion on Unit 06. ^^;; 

>> Correct
 Free talking is also good but I felt that our topics were limited and repeated.

>> Correct
 I think our book has various topics so I want to study it more. 

>> Correct
 Let\'s discuss about this issue tomorrow! 

>> Correct
 See you tomorrow! ^^**

>> Correct

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