Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름],
While I was reading your composition, I just felt
that I had taken a lecture in Investment 101!^^
Thank you though for telling me about these things.
I am interested in it but I don\'t promise that I can easily understand these things.
See you tomorrow~
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good morning, Teacher!
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We suddenly talked about stocks.
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Maybe, this subject would be strange for you because you have never experienced that one.
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However, I am sure that it won\'t help you unless you are very capable with that.
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Even if someone is very skillful but the person is individual, there is only a tiny possibility to earn money.
>> Even if there is a skillful individual, there is only a tiny possibility to earn money.
It means that you won\'t win over speculators who invest a huge amount of money.
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However, there are still a lot of individuals who invest in stocks and they continue investing even if they failed and lost their money.
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Maybe, they want to recoup the loss that they suffered and this mentality seems to make them do that again and again.
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I think investment in stocks is also a kind of addiction and gambling.
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I have never seen people making a profit on it and I have seen a lot of instances that people were miserable with losing money.
>> I have never seen people making a profit on it and I have seen a lot of instances that people were miserable because of losing money.
No matter what, making a deposit is the best way to make money grow more.
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That is all for today and see you! ^^**
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