Composition

Good morning, teacher. The rainy season has been set in here in Malaysia. It has been raining a lot yesterday. Although I didn't like the rain in Korea, I like the rain in Malaysia because it makes the temperature lower. Anyway, could you read and review my email below? Dear [Name]. [Name] morning, Ms. [Name]. Thanks to your help, my family is adjusting well to new life. Again, I appreciate for your helo. Today, I have two questions regarding school life. Could you answer some of my questions below? First, I'd like to use Power School website. But, I don't know how to log in there. Could you explain how to use that website? Next, when can we(my husband and I) have a school ID? We hope to have them soon. Best regards [이름] I have a favor to ask of you. Jayden will start his first class of Taekwondo tomorrow. So, could you let him know the location for Taekwondo. According to the notice, Covered Recess Area is the place for Taekwondo. But, I guess he might not know it.

Hello, Kaylee! In tropical countries like Malaysia (and my country), the rain is often a blessing. However, there\'s the pesky humidity too. Haha! Anyway, I checked your composition here. Please review my corrections. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, teacher. >> CORRECT!The rainy season has been set in here in Malaysia. >> The rainy season has started here in Malaysia.It has been raining a lot yesterday. >> It rained a lot yesterday.Although I didn\'t like the rain in Korea, I like the rain in Malaysia because it makes the temperature lower.>> CORRECT!Anyway, could you read and review my email below?>> CORRECT!Dear [Name]. [Name]>> Dear [Name]. [Name],Good morning, Ms. [Name]. >> Good morning, ma\'am!Thanks to your help, my family is adjusting well to new life. >> Thanks to your help, my family is adjusting well to our new life.Again, I appreciate for your helo. >> I appreciate your help.Today, I have two questions regarding school life. >> I have a couple of questions regarding my son\'s school life.Could you answer some of my questions below?>> CORRECT!First, I\'d like to use Power School website. >> First, I\'d like to use the Power School website.But, I don\'t know how to log in there. >> CORRECT!Could you explain how to use that website?>> Could you explain to me how to use that website?Next, when can we(my husband and I) have a school ID?>> Second, when can my husband and me get a school ID? We hope to have them soon.>> We hope to get them soon.Best regards >> CORRECT!Giyeon [이름]>> CORRECT!I have a favor to ask of you. >> CORRECT!Jayden will start his first class of Taekwondo tomorrow. >> CORRECT!So, could you let him know the location for Taekwondo. >> Could you tell him where to go for his Taekwondo class? OR:>> Could you give him directions to his Taekwondo class?According to the notice, Covered Recess Area is the place for Taekwondo. >> According to the notice, it is going to be held in the Covered Recess Area.But, I guess he might not know it. >> But I think he might not know where it is.