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2016-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher! What happened to the center there? When I was ready to listen to the class, I noticed late that I got a mobile message from Power English and I realized that there is a problem on the call center. Is it because of the Typhoon that you told last time? I am worried about your situation.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름].

I apologize for the absence.

Yes, it was about the typhoon.

Maybe, I can talk more about this tomorrow.

Hoping everything will be fine.

Don\'t worry. I\'m still alive!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

>> Correct
 What happened to the center there? 

>> Correct
 When I was ready to listen to the class, I noticed late that I got a mobile message from Power English and I realized that there is a problem on the call center. 

>> Correct
 Is it because of the Typhoon that you told last time? 

>> Correct
 I am worried about your situation.

>> Correct

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