Composition

Hello, teacher. I know that you are not ok because of the typhoon these few days. As I told you, I will pray for you and your family. Today, I read an article from the Power English website. This article is for the students taking a course of English newspapers. Its title was 'Nigerian girls, reuniting with parents, tell of Boko Haram slavery'. Some girls in Nigeria were taken away by the militants. After the abduction, they were forced to choose one option between two offers. One was to join the militants, and the other was to become their slaves. If I were them, I would rather choose to become their slaves than to join the militants. Of course, both options are terrible to choose. However, there is a reason for me to choose the latter one. If I join the militants, I would cooperate with them to kill a lot of people. I can not make a choice which coud lead numerous people to death. Of course, I wish this terrible situation won't happen to me.

Hello there, Kaylee! Thanks for your concern. I appreciate it. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, teacher.>> CORRECT! I know that you are not ok because of the typhoon these few days.>> I know that you are not okay because of the typhoon these past few days. As I told you, I will pray for you and your family.>> CORRECT!Today, I read an article from the Power English website. >> CORRECT!This article is for the students taking a course of English newspapers. >> This article is for the students who are taking the English newspaper course.Its title was \'Nigerian girls, reuniting with parents, tell of Boko Haram slavery\'. >> CORRECT!Some girls in Nigeria were taken away by the militants. >> CORRECT!After the abduction, they were forced to choose one option between two offers. >> CORRECT!One was to join the militants, and the other was to become their slaves. >> CORRECT!If I were them, I would rather choose to become their slaves than to join the militants. >> CORRECT!Of course, both options are terrible to choose. >> Of course, both are terrible options.However, there is a reason for me to choose the latter one. >> However, there is a reason why I would choose the latter.If I join the militants, I would cooperate with them to kill a lot of people. >> If I join the militants, I would cooperate with them in killing a lot of people.I can not make a choice which coud lead numerous people to death. >> I cannot choose the option which could lead to the death of numerous people.Of course, I wish this terrible situation won\'t happen to me. >> CORRECT!