Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there my dear,
Thank you for this composition. I hope I was able to help you today. Have a great day ahead!
Take care ~
Dear [Name]. [Name],
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Good morning!
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Would you please also give me a task in the QM notification about "Heater Core" ?
>>Would you please also give me a task in the QM notification about "Heater Core" .
And please give ma a documentation that it is agreed with the supplier as well as the calculation.
>>And please give me a documentation that was agreed with the supplier as well as the calculation.
>>And please give me a documentation as well as the calculation that was agreed with the supplier.
The calculation should be based on the guideline stored under Q:9 Local BMSFinance & ControllingRegulation
>>The calculation should be based on the guideline stored under Q:9 Local BMSFinance & ControllingRegulation.
I use to use Ms.Cha's ID to upload data in Bellin and I don't have any ID of Bellin untill now.
>>I use to use Ms.Cha's ID to upload data in Bellin ,and until now I don't have any ID in Bellin .
I don't have any ID in Bellin.
>>Correct but you may omit this sentence as it was already explained at the sentence above.
Would you please create new ID of Bellin for me?
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Thank you for your help.
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