Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s a good thing to see that you
have already decided to choose the wedding dress!^^
I want to see you, [이름]!!! TT.TT
Thank you for sharing this important information and the concern you showed
during our crisis here.
See you tomorrow.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon, Teacher!
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I am happy to see you alive. ^^
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I think it is the best way for you to not go out when you experience a heavy typhoon like yesterday.
>> I think it is the best way for you not to go out when you experience a heavy typhoon like yesterday.
Your safety is the most important asset, so if this situation happens again, you don\'t need to hesitate to stay at home.
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Of course, I don\'t want you to experience this kind of big typhoon again. ^^;;
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By the way, yesterday, I tried my wedding dress on again and I finally chose a bell style dress.
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I am planning to have an event in my wedding so I would feel very uncomfortable if I wear a mermaid style dress.
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Moreover, I am not confident to lose much weight so I gave up the mermaid style dress. Hahaha!
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Everything goes smoothly but the problem there is that I haven\'t had my ears pierced.
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I somehow feel afraid about the piercing. ^^;;
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That is all for today and have a wonderful weekend! ^^
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