Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kaylee!
I reviewed and checked your composition below.
Please take note of my corrections.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, teacher.
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Yesterday, my family\'s stuff from Korea finally arrived in my condo here in Kualar Lumpur.
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>> Kuala Lumpur
My husband took a day off help me organize our stuff in their proper place.
>> My husband took a day off to help me organize our stuff around the house.
It took about 3 or 4 hours to finish all.
>> It took about 3 or 4 hours to finish organizing everything.
There were a lot of Korean food in my stuff from Korea.
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So, I have plenty of Korean food to eat now.
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Of course, I can buy various kinds of Korean food here in Malaysia.
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But, they are usually more expensive here than in Korea, and the kinds of food I can buy are limited.
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So, I sent a lot of Korean food to Malaysia as many as I can pack.
>> So I packed as many Korean food as I could and sent it here.
This evening, I\'m planning to make Korean style spice noodles for my son.
>> This evening, I\'m planning to make some Korean-style spicy noodles for my son.
That is one of his favorite food.
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Since last Wednesday, I\'ve taken an English conversation class in a private institute.
>> I\'ve been taking an English conversation class in a private institute since last Wednesday.
The teacher is a Malaysian who can speak English very well.
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She told that she just came back to Malaysia last month after studying in Sydney for 4 years.
>> She told me that she just got back in Malaysia last month after studying in Sydney for 4 years.
She\'s very young, just 25 years old, so she\'s very energetic.^^
>> She\'s only 25 years old so she\'s very energetic.
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