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2016-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, teacher. Yesterday, my family's stuff from Korea finally arrived in my condo here in Kualar Lumpur. My husband took a day off help me organize our stuff in their proper place. It took about 3 or 4 hours to finish all. There were a lot of Korean food in my stuff from Korea. So, I have plenty of Korean food to eat now. Of course, I can buy various kinds of Korean food here in Malaysia. But, they are usually more expensive than in Korea, and the kinds of food I can buy are limited. So, I sent a lot of Korean food to Malaysia as many as I can pack. This evening, I'm planning to make Korean style spice noodles for my son. That is one of his favorite food. Since last Wednesday, I've taken an English conversation class in a private institute. The teacher is a Malaysian who can speak English very well. She told that she just came back to Malaysia last month after studying in Sydney for 4 years. She's very young, just 25 years old, so she's very energetic.^^

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Kaylee!

I reviewed and checked your composition below.

Please take note of my corrections.

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~

Hello, teacher.

>> CORRECT!
 Yesterday, my family\'s stuff from Korea finally arrived in my condo here in Kualar Lumpur.

>> CORRECT!

>> Kuala Lumpur
 My husband took a day off help me organize our stuff in their proper place.

>> My husband took a day off to help me organize our stuff around the house.
 It took about 3 or 4 hours to finish all.

>> It took about 3 or 4 hours to finish organizing everything.
 There were a lot of Korean food in my stuff from Korea.

>> CORRECT!
 So, I have plenty of Korean food to eat now.

>> CORRECT!
 Of course, I can buy various kinds of Korean food here in Malaysia.

>> CORRECT!
 But, they are usually more expensive here than in Korea, and the kinds of food I can buy are limited.

>> CORRECT!
 So, I sent a lot of Korean food to Malaysia as many as I can pack.

>> So I packed as many Korean food as I could and sent it here.
 This evening, I\'m planning to make Korean style spice noodles for my son.

>> This evening, I\'m planning to make some Korean-style spicy noodles for my son.
That is one of his favorite food.
>> CORRECT!
Since last Wednesday, I\'ve taken an English conversation class in a private institute.

>> I\'ve been taking an English conversation class in a private institute since last Wednesday.
 The teacher is a Malaysian who can speak English very well.

>> CORRECT!
 She told that she just came back to Malaysia last month after studying in Sydney for 4 years.

>> She told me that she just got back in Malaysia last month after studying in Sydney for 4 years.
 She\'s very young, just 25 years old, so she\'s very energetic.^^

>> She\'s only 25 years old so she\'s very energetic.


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