Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
I am impressed with how you say your thoughts.
However, here in our country, the idea of having a friend
of the opposite sex still has this \"romantic love\" although
they are already at their old age. Let me discuss
this one further tomorrow.
~~Teacher Erine~~
Good afternoon,Teacher!
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Today, we talked about friendship with male friends.
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I think the basic relationship with the opposite sex is more on \'a sexual emotion\'.
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Someone said that the relationship with the opposite sex can last for a long time if one of two is romantically interested in the other one.
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I also agreed with this idea when I was younger.
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However, as I get old, I have found that it is possible to have a real relationship with male friends and it is more precious than my same sex friends.
>> However, as I get old, I have found out that it is possible to have a real relationship with male friends and it is more precious than my same sex friends.
Sometimes, I feel more comfortable when I meet my male friends.
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They are not only generous but also don\'t care about trivial things.
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Moreover, even if they got married, they still put importance on friendship.
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I don\'t want to lose my precious male friends just because of the prejudice that people usually have.
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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**
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