Composition

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you expressed your thoughts.

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~~Teacher Erine~~

Good morning, Teacher!

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 Today, we talked about wedding expenses. 

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 I think the wedding expense really depends on the will of the person directly involved. 

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 There would be people who think that they are willing to pay a high cost for their wedding. 

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 In their case, the cost will be naturally higher and higher because they pursue a perfect wedding.

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 They might think that it is once in the life time experience so it deserves a high cost.

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 I agree with this idea and I don\'t want to blame them if they are financial. 

>> I agree with this idea and I don\'t want to blame them if they are financially equipped.
 However, there are instances that some couples spend expenses excessively just in order to make a bluff and show off in front of other people. 

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 They might not want to feel small in their wedding ceremony.

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 I somehow can understand what they feel but if they only chase pretensions and decency, the meaning of the wedding ceremony would halve.

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 No matter what, it is okay as long as the people directly involved feel happy during the ceremony and live well together with happiness for their whole lives. 

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That is all for today and see you tomorrow! ^^**

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